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I talked to you for two minutes in the coffee shop. You got talent. I was a recruiter in advertising after struggling trying to make it as a writer. I say you should reread “TOMORROW, TOMORROW, TOMORROW” what every woman your age has read, especially the ones who went to MIT!!!’ Think like Sadie in that blessed book. Your writing needs just a little more bite. I also suggest Chuck Klostermann, Merrill Markoe, and David SEDARIS. They write stuff that makes you laugh out loud. Hard to accomplish. And if you like fashion criticism, no one did it better than Mike Redmond and a site called “The SUPERFICIAL.” Buzzzfeed bought it and the whole thing died. But the guy had a way touching on the zeitgeist by mercilessly critiquing the fashion sensibilities of “celebrities.”

Hey, you can also continue be a “nice,” positive-positive-positive writer with daily affirmations and all. But remember where you are. Chicago. Home of the “Onion.” Be a little more snarky—that’s what I’m trying to say.

P.S. it’s brutal writing. Few are chosen. So do have that backup gig!….And while you are at it—design a winning ad campaign for Discover—because they have never ever had one. They always did junk mail at an unheard of level…..

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